In my first book, Dangerous Stars, I introduced a secondary character named Michelle Henrix. She was a survivor from an attacked research vessel. During her time on the KRENNET, she aided the ship's engineer with tasks around the ship. She vanished searching for the station where the KRENNET had been built.
In an epilogue for the sequel, Striking Among the Stars, she appears again. This time as the captain and only crewmember of her own ship. I've never thought much about what may have happened to her between leaving the KRENNET and boarding the BELLADONNA. Until today that is.
Two weeks. That's how long Michelle had been living on this remote station. Arriving at the construction facility, she was quickly hired as a lead technician. Apparently, showing up with a fuel transfer coil from the premiere ship of the previous generation of ships went a long way when applying for a position.
Two weeks of working in either a cramped passage filled with pipes and cables or drifting through wide-open space in a tight spacesuit. Two weeks socializing with other technicians and engineers during off shifts. Two weeks becoming known to everyone on the project for her efforts on the job and friendliness off the job. Her name began to appear frequently in the reports reviewed by the handful of unknown figures that operated the facility. This is something they commented to each other in their encrypted, clandestine communications.
While Michelle was installing the secondary signal relay system between the central command system and engineering deck, her next assignment was being determined without her knowledge. The members of the group unknown to each other, recognized only by codenames and familiar voices.
"Unlike many of the candidates we have looked at, we have first-hand knowledge of her work ethics and abilities."
"That we do. However, she seems too perfect. I question so much about someone so ideal literally appearing on our doorstep like she did."
"You always have been so cynical and suspicious. We have investigated and vetted her background. I will admit that her encounter with both projects Cloud Cover and Hidden Knife is very coincidental. However, with all the strange coincidences this universe has presented us with, it's not impossible."
"You're both right. Given the type of fleet we are attempting to build here, we need to be cautious in regards to the crew we put on our ships. We also need to be aware of the fact that the growth in the number of those ships will increase the chances of someone seeking us out and finding us, even if by accident. We only build at the one remote platform in order to minimize the chances of discovery. On the other hand, we don't arm and defend it heavily so those that do find us can approach unthreatened. It is all part of our ultimate goal."
"According to my notes, she is liked by nearly everyone she has worked with. I still wonder why she has never been put in a leadership position.
"She has been offered a number of promotions that would put her in charge of many subordinates. She accepted the first one but has refused all others. Something about her character makes her unfit for a large command and she knows it."
"I guess it's a good thing this will not be a concern with the crew of this new ship. Leadership abilities aren't required when there is nobody to lead."
"I will compromise. Madam Michelle will be considered a top candidate for the pilot's seat. Still, I will send some of my own personal agents to interview people from her past in order to further verify the authenticity of her background."
"Understood. While we wait for the final word from your agents, we can move ahead with some of the testing required. As Michelle is already with the installation of bridge equipment, it wouldn't be a leap of logic for her to test the pilot/AI interface system. Much of the neurological compatibility and response time testing can be done at the same time."
"We will not eliminate any of the other candidates from future considerations until we are unanimous in our choice. Regardless of who it is or what species they may be."
With that agreement, Michelle's future career was determined. Either she would pilot the craft she was currently lending a hand in building, or she would be "eliminated from future considerations."
Back at the station, far from any of the individuals making important decisions, Michelle finishes her shift and rides the shuttle between the construction platform and the station housing the living and entertainment quarters. She makes a comment about one of the construction managers that causes all of the shuttle passengers to laugh loudly or quietly chuckle. Even the pilot, brother of the subject of her comment, smiles.
I may or may not give Michelle Henrix her own book. Would it still be considered a spin-off if the originating series is only two books? There is so much to think about when creating an entire universe and filling it with characters and events.
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Wednesday, March 23, 2016
Endings
When planning a road trip you look at where you are, where you are going, and any stops you may want to visit along the way. Writing a novel is generally done in the same way. Figure out where the characters start and who they are. Then, put them into situations that challenge them along their journey to the end of the story. That is how it's supposed to work anyway.
Sometimes the characters refuse to cooperate and decide they want to take a different route than originally planned. They would rather go and see The Alamo instead of taking the northern route by Mount Rushmore. I am having trouble finishing off my current novel, the sequel to Dangerous Stars. One of the characters wanted to be playful, so I wrote in a prank for him to pull off. Now my cast of crew mates doesn't want the story to end.
Until I manage to get them in line, here is a sample scene from the as yet untitled novel.
Sometimes the characters refuse to cooperate and decide they want to take a different route than originally planned. They would rather go and see The Alamo instead of taking the northern route by Mount Rushmore. I am having trouble finishing off my current novel, the sequel to Dangerous Stars. One of the characters wanted to be playful, so I wrote in a prank for him to pull off. Now my cast of crew mates doesn't want the story to end.
Until I manage to get them in line, here is a sample scene from the as yet untitled novel.
In
the space outside, the CARRION CRUISER reaches a distance from the
KRENNET that would barely be considered safe for maneuvering by
nearly any pilot in space. The captain of the CARRION CRUISER
transmits a signal directly to the KRENNET that Crystal relays to
Traylor.
“This
is Gierness Johnson, captain of the CARRION CRUISER. Delivery has
been completed and accepted. The cargo is alive and well in your
possession. We will depart this system once payment has been made
and your AI sends ours the deposit authorization code.”
“Captain
Johnson, this is Traylor. I am the pilot of the KRENNET. We were
not authorized to make any kind of payment or credit transfer at this
time. That wasn't a part of the instructions we agreed to. The
previous carriers didn't require anything before their departures.
It is our understanding that payment will be arranged by the officer
that dispatched you with your orders.”
“No!
I refuse to split any more payments with a little rat of a middle
man that risks nothing more serious than a sore on his ass from
sitting in his chair too long. We take the chances with the
authorities, we risk our lives handling these and transporting these
scum. We deserve more than just a pittance to live on. Now, either
pay us or give us all the slaves you have. We'll deliver them
ourselves and get the big payday.”
As
Captain Johnson spoke, a series of alarming indicators activate on
Traylor's panels. Crystal confirms what Traylor is seeing. “The
other ship is activating their weapons systems and they are targeting
us.”
Traylor
thumbs a switch that will broadcast her voice through the entire
ship. “Attention all personnel. Passengers secure yourselves to
your bunks. Crew to stations. The CARRION CRUISER has taken an
aggressive stance and we expect to be attacked at any minute. All
airlocks are being automatically sealed. Passengers, be aware all
hatches between cargo bay decks are automatically secured as well.
In case of injury, please remain where you are until the threat has
passed and help will be dispatched to you.”
While I try to get everyone in line, feel free to get yourself a copy of Dangerous Stars and Post Exodus to enjoy. Once you've read them, leave a comment here or a review on your favorite site saying what you thought.
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